The VO was a nice touch, but not needed. The audio quality was distracting and instead of adding value, it took that away.
The animations were decent and did bring more "life" to this game, so keep working on that :)
The intro was too long. Cut that in half and you should be able to keep the player's attention.
Overall, it's a decent game with much more to offer if you polish it some more.
Good job :)